Case of the Crestfallen Redhead

So I was doodling on my computer not too long ago and I happened to draw a series of panels for what turned out to be a cartoon. I had written a story to go with it but I didn't like what was said, I was having more fun drawing the pictures. Since I wasn't doing anything with the drawings I thought I'd add them here. I thought maybe you guys would be interested in writing the story to go along with the pictures. I think what I will do is add all the drawings and if people are interested, they can post what they think each panel should say. I will pick the the caption I think fits best with the drawing and see if we can end up with an interesting little tale. Who knows, if it's really good I might be inspired to draw more pictures and we can end up telling an entire story created soley for the board.

Okay I'll fill you in on how it starts but that's it. Our as of yet unnamed hero is waiting for a girl who has some information for him, but she never shows up. That's it for the beginning. The rest is up to you guys. Here's the pictures:

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Last edited by Sai on March 23, 2006 • 11:59 am, edited 1 time in total.
This isn't serious:

"Is the back of my head on fire?" He says whilst flipping a cookie...

"I need a bigger watch... *squints* Feh, I give up waiting."

"My head really was on fire... now I need to buy a new hat"

"You have 1 new message" *click* "If you don't give me back my cookie, I'm gonna break into your house and TAKE IT! Jerk."

"Oh yeah? Well we'll just see who breaks into who... or what... or, ah nevermind"

*VROOOO *bdump* OOOOOM* "I gotta get that tire fixed...."

"I'm so good at this breaking and entering stuff *ignores the door already being open*"

"Oh look a discount card for the Shed Kickers pub, I'm all up for kicking some sheds.*"

"Great man, you write your computer passwords on paper? Nice! format c: here I come!"

"Wheres the sheds around here?"

"Hey guys, where's the she- AHHH! *THUD* Where's the floor in this place! It's just a black abyss!" "Just grab a floating stool and shut up"

"Oh no you don't, no hats allowed in pubs! New UK rule!"

*THUD* "But I'm not in the UK!" "Tough"
(Ruri_Ayanami from the old Tex Murphy ezboard).
"I don't believe in intuition, don't know why... just a feeling." - Tex Murphy
Good job, ES. Look forward to next installment.
"If you look to me for illumination, you better have a flashlight!"
That reminded me of a short series of dectecive spoofs I saw before.

http://www.ctrlaltdel-online.com/comic.php?d=20030201
http://www.ctrlaltdel-online.com/comic.php?d=20030208
http://www.ctrlaltdel-online.com/comic.php?d=20030215
http://www.ctrlaltdel-online.com/comic.php?d=20030216
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http://nvracar.wordpress.com/
Well, I figured after a week I'd have a COUPLE more captions to go along with the drawings but I guess Sai's responses are the captions as they are the only ones. They're not quite what I expected but funny none the less, they made me laugh.
Sorry you didn't get any more, yeah mine weren't really meant to be serious (didn't think I'd be the only one), I couldn't think of anything better :oops:
I'm glad you liked them though! :D
(Ruri_Ayanami from the old Tex Murphy ezboard).
"I don't believe in intuition, don't know why... just a feeling." - Tex Murphy